peer review revision

Comp 1 – Writer’s Revision Sheet








Original

(what you wrote)


Revision

(how it changed after feedback)


Explanation/Rule

(catchy way to remember next time)




Genre 1 – Introduction was not descriptive


Added more material to my introduction and made it look more professional


Look over my work more carefully and spend more time on the little things.




Genre 2 – red and green border


Red and black border

(less Christmas-y)


colors have cultural associations